Decided to start again try and make it work one more time as it's a grand scale project that needs to be out in the world but wanna re-think story so it works like a screenplay , whats more also gotta figure out how am I going to approach this , pen , ink? photoshop ? That needs to be done with a style that is all my own but at same time readable and easilly understood
Couple of old design sketchs from 2012 (seriously didn't think it was that long ago) when I was going for it for some reason
Anyway here's script for The Dedly Sins story I wrote earlier in the decade ends suddenly as I gave up my heart went out of it - here's how it turned out but I'm going back to my sketch books and try another approach
https://hipsville365ad.blogspot.com/2015/07/the-futureless-chapter-1the-deadly-sins.html
and here's the script
Frame 1: Full moon over London ,View on Tower Bridge against the yellow moon three tiny spots can also be seen against the distance. Two Policemen stand by their grounded Aero Panda Car one gazes at the three dots with his advanced binoculars
Policeman 1:"Full moon brings out the loons they say"
Policeman 2:(with the binoculars) "Too right Sarge-'ere have a ganders at this."
Frame 2:
Side view of Police Sergeant with binoculars his eyes widen at the sight-
Policeman 1:"Kliqueys! -proper troublemakers maybe we call up the microbe cam division for this.
Frame 3:
A better view of the 3 dots on the moon.. the silhouettes of air scooters appear-including wind-mirrors and there riders.
Policeman 2:"Allo Microbes required at this location,I'll punch you in the co-ordinates."
Frame 4:
The Images draw closer three riders are approaching but they also have pillion passengers-In the center is Rudy Churchill -with his girlfriend Pillbox clinging onto him wearing trademark black and white suit pork pie hat and two tone scooter "Buster"-whilst Pillbox wears her police chiefs hat and plastic mack -to his right is Jonah Jacks replesent in Astro-Parka ever present roll up in mouth and ever present sunglasses fixed firmly to his face he too has a girl riding in the back seat-this is Emilia Wood , long honey blonde bunches flying in the wind done up in the height of mod fashion in a yellow suit dress -similar to one worn by Verna Bloom in Medium Cool.. white belt white high boots. To Rudy's left Bruiser Collin's- a big man burgundy suit he isn't as lucky as Jonah and Rudy as in his back saddle sits Davey Crocker -wears a Davey Crockett hat made from raccoon and astro parka similar to Jonahs with a few personal alterations -the scooter bruiser flies differs somewhat from the Jonah and Rudy's as it's an older model.
Microbe Cam Control:"Wilco-You'll get clear I.D's in a tick."
Policeman 1:" Thank you control."
Frame 5:
Side view of the Klique gang members their names appear in electronic writing above their heads except Emilia's for some reason.We are getting view via binoculars-
Policeman 1:"Well looky here -Bruiser Collins wanted for extortion, Jacks smoking in a public area
-Pillbox ere's got a record long as your arm for pushing narcotics. Churchill's clean far as I know-I think he's in with The Skroats"
Policeman:"Makes him untouchable -pity and it's a shame we can't get a I.D on the girl -wonder what she's doing with these losers"
Frame 6:
The two cops standing on the bridge Sarge lowers binoculars as he chats to fellow officer.
Policeman 1:"I think we'll keep tabs on these can you summon up any "MetalTops" if any troubles brew.
Police Car:" Affirmative-we'll keep tracking them Sergeant"
Policeman 2:"Could be quite a haul-I'd love to go one to one with those Sky Scum!"
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Frame 7:
Front view of the scooters as they fly over the Thames , the riders converse in a conversation. Bruiser Collins:" This is where we go our separate ways Rude Boy-debts to collect"
Rudy Churchill:"Yeah catch you later-Party at Steve's House-your invited as long as you and your sidekick don't throw wait around" Davey Crocker:"Harp at Lord Churchill ere..Sidekick my fanny!"
Jonah Jacks:"Zip it Crocker you shit stirrer!
" Frame 8: Side view of Jacks -and view of Crocker giving it some on the back of Collin's scooter
-Crocker points knife at Jacks and sneers.
Davey Crocker:" and you Jacks! you need striping boy!"
. Jonah Jacks:"Shut it Toerag!"
Frame 9:
Rear view of the scooters as they fly over the lit up London skyline.Bruisers Scooter dips down.Away from the straight path the newer scooters are taking.
Pillbox:" You two get a room will ya!" Frame 9: Side view of Collins and Crocker -Collins is irate with his co-passenger.
Bruiser Collins :"Cheeky Git, mind you he's got a point."
Frame 10: Concerned look on Crockers face as he clutchs his hat- Davey Crocker:" How do you mean boss?"
Frame 11:
The Scooter slowly glides down towards a public house a long black car is parked outside we can make out the bumper of the Deluxe Dragwulf - the pubs sign say's "The Cockney Bastard" which has the illustration of a angry looking Pearly King giving the V sign.
Bruiser Collins:"You are a manipulative little weasle.."
Frame 12: The two mods dismount the scooter which is now touched down on the pavement-Collins approaches the old pubs doors whilst Crocker lifts his backside off the scooters seat.
Bruiser Collins:"Leave the talking to me alright!"
Davey Crocker:"Manipulative hmm I like the sound of that."
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Frame 13:
Bruiser opens door with two hands view inside of pub we see a black clad girl with the word "Zenta" written on back of jacket and a psychedelic pattern with a pyramid and an eye at the center.She's served by a toothy grinned barmaid -
Frame 14:
Bruiser and Crocker are now fully inside the pub back view of girl chatting to barmaid still they are deep in conversation. Bruiser and Crockers body language suggest impatience .
Bruiser Collins:"Oi Oi Doris! is Chas about?"
Barmaid:" Then I said you enjoying that sandwich .. "
Frame 15:Front view of girl-Louisa Sheen side view of Barmaid still yacking away -Louisa seems to enjoying the story.
Barmaid:"and I said mines appalling I can tell you that much.."
Bruiser: "Can we get some service here?"
Frame 16: Bruiser's hand approaches Louisa's shoulder.
Bruiser:"S'cuse me darlin' got business to take..."
Frame 17:
Suddenly Bruiser grabs his wrist he's burnt his hand as he placed his hand on Louisa's shoulder..steam coming from his palm, he yelps in pain .. Crocker stares on in disbelief.the other punters in pub are alerted by Bruisers yelps-Sierra Lima, JJ and Rio Royale sit at a round table facing the bar.
Bruiser:"AHHH Fack !me 'and!"
Frame 18:
Crocker produces a large blade he reacts quickly to the situation -Louisa stares coolly at him .Bruiser whince's in pain .
Crocker:"Acid Jacket-bleeding Rucka's I'm gonna you carve up good and proper Gurl!
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Frame 19:
Side view of Crocker ready to use blade -the gang leader just slouches on the bar , like Crocker's threats mean nothing to her. The Barmaid produces two pints and smiles her idiotic smile... but she's more sly than she looks.
Crocker:"Gonna dice n slice ya nice"
Louisa Sheen:"Oh spare me !"
Barmaid:"C'Mon Lads Chas is on the Khazi he'll be with you in a mo',Drinks are on the house".
Frame 20:
Crocker eye to eye with Sheen.He's trying contain his rage.
Davey Crocker:"Good job for you we're both parched - you even look in our direction .."
Louisa Sheen:" I get the Picture -just hope you see it was an accident little man."
Frame 21:
Louisa walks away towards her fellow gang members at the table- Crocker consoles Bruiser handing him his pint.
Louisa Sheen:"For you're information sunshine Rucka's aint no friends of ours either"
Frame 22:
Crocker slurps his beer back turned to Louisa - whilst Bruiser stands aimlessly full pint in his left hand. Louisa takes a seat as she joins her friends.
Davey Crocker:"Bitch!"
Frame 23:
The girls at the table-Louisa looks totally chilled even after the incident at the bar-Rio in her red special forces beret red Jacket and pink hair scans the room-her twin non pink haired sister JJ sits on other side of the table with back to readers, Sierra Lima has her nose buried in a news paper.
Rio Royale:"You OK Boss?"
Louisa Sheen:"Yeah fine." Sierra Lima:"You know she's at it again?"
Louisa Sheen:"Who?..oh Rita."
Frame 24: Close up of JJ Hat on head.
JJ Royale:"If you ask me that girls got no morals"
Frame 25:
Close up of Louisa sipping her drink.
Louisa Sheen:" And whats morality got to do with it we're the Sins JJ you better evil up or your out."
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Frame 26: The girls sitting around table sipping drinks Sierra shuffles newspaper
. Sierra Lima:"She's going through an older man phase again"
Louisa Sheen:"She's got Chas in there?" Sierra Lima:"uhuh!"
Frame 27:
Bruiser and Davey Crocker glare at the girls at table from the bar.
Davey Crocker:"Skanky Cows!"
Bruiser Collins:" Forget it man-was an accident!-we'll just wait for Mr Flowers."
Frame 28:
Crocker and Bruiser turn towards bar and continue their conversation.
Bruiser Collins:"See that Burd Jonah was with-a real smasher!"
Crocker:"Russian or Somefink.. too bad your right hands fucked"
Frame 29:
Bruiser takes umbridge to this remark close up of his fuming face.
Bruiser Collins:"I still got a devastating left hook mush! just saying..."
Frame 30:
Jonah, Emilia , Rudy and Pillbox glide above the rooftops of a London Street.
Bruiser Collins:" some guys have all the luck."
Crocker:"But in his case it's bad luck -they don't call him Jonah for nuthin',"
Frame 31: Rudy waves to Emilia
Rudy Churchill:"Almost there you alright ?"
Frame 32:
Jonah and Emilia close up Jonah arches head to Rudy
Jonah Jacks:"It's no use Rudy- she only knows a few English words-I think she's lost her dog or something? that's how I met her"
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Frame 33:
The two scooters pull up to a swank flat-with steps leading up to the doorway - a drunk mod type sits passed out on the door
Rudy Churchill: "Number 13 Chester Street-It's Rave Up Time!"
Frame 34:
The four youths clamber up the steps Rudy reaches front door..it's answered by a man in a beige suit red tie, looking for all the world like Peter Sellers in the 1968 film The Party ,this is Doctor Rajiv.
Doctor Rajiv:"Hey Rude Boy glad you can make it's a great jam man!"
Frame 35:
The five walk through the luxurious flats hallway various party goers can be seen as they walk by.
Jonah Jacks:"c'mon comrade we got nibbles to nobble "
Pillbox:"Is Stevie about? he owes me a few bob"
Frame 36:
Big panel showing swinging party in full swing in the living room-to the back of the room a band play- a supergroup- on guitar a young Jimmy Page-on vocals and rhythm guitar a dead ringer for Steve Marriot - the bass player looks like he's auditioning for the Downliner Sect in his tweeds and deerstalker-whilst the drummer seems to be very young Keith Moon.Tickling the ivories is Georgie Fame.Backing vocals are provided by PP Arnold. Among the party you can make out Mrs Pink-the Japanese member of the Sins with her big distinctive pink hat. Doctor Rajiv points over to Steve on vocals to indicate he's busy on stage.
Doctor Rajiv :"He'll be with you soon as he's done his set Missy -in the meantime try out our punch -powerful stuff-guaranteed to blow your mind ha ha!.. my own recipe "
Stevie:" ..I'm alright!... COME ON CHILDERN!"
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Frame 37:
Rudy knocks back a glass of punch as the music blares away in the back ground -Jonah tries to encourage Emilia to Dance- Pillbox chucks a few pills down her throat. Revelers are having a good time.
Jonah Jacks:"C'mon sweetheart lets shake some action!"
Emilia Wood:"Hooy na ny!!!"
Rudy Churchill:"I take it your going to get blocked tonight"
Pillbox:"Don't blame me it was you who got me hooked on these sweeties!"
Frame 38:
Enter Alan Christ- the mod god -white make up on face black eyeliner bowler hat white boiler suit carrying an umbrella looking all the world like he owns the place (his modified clone gorrila bodyguards in boiler suits and bowlers re-inforce this notion) his group of hangers on cowering behind him-his entrance catches Rudy and Pillbox's attention as well as the rest of the room..
Pillbox:"Who's this joker - he needs to catch some ray's"
Rudy Churchill:"Pipe down girl-that's Alan Christ King of the Klique!"
Frame 39:
The white faced deity turns to Rudy - Alan Christ:"Hey Rude Boy -wheres the Bruiser at?"
Rudy Churchill:" He's down the Bastard doing a errand for the Skroats!"
Frame 40:
Close up of Alan Christ grinning
Alan Christ:" Ahh the Skroats -the big time boys -harder they come harder they fall I say .. this youngbloods moving up if you see Collins.."
Rudy Churchill:"I'll tell him Mr Christ"
Frame 41:
Crocker seems to be dozing off Bruiser gives him a nudge .We can make out the girls table in the background.
Davey Crocker:"Wha where wuh!"
Bruiser Collins:"Fer Nazz sakes sharpen up Crocker-you've only two pints and having 40 winks."
Frame 42:
Sierra who sitting close to the mens room the sound pulsating is too much she shields her ear from the grunts groans and football scores.
. Rita Tusk:"URRH YEAH ..NOT THERE ..LOWER...OOOHH ...THATS RIGHT!!"
Chas Flowers:"West Bromich Albion One-Crystal Palace Three--urrghh- Fulham ahh two-Liverpool Threeeeeee!"
Sierra Lima.."Oh this is just wrong.. he's old enough to be.."
Frame 43:
Rio and Sierra gaze at each other blankly in complete silence shot of toilet door.
Chas Flowers:" * "
Rio Royale:"There goes the final whistle"
Frame 44:
Chas bursts through the door glasses crooked comb-over all over the place , lipstick kissmarks on cheek and head,he adjusts his fly as he leaves the gentlemens toilet .
Chas Flowers: " Pah -I could of done with extra time, could of taken it to penalties!"
Frame 45:
Rio and Sierra stare at Chas as he saunters to the bar as toilet door swings open we can make out Rita Tusk fixing her auburn beehive in the mirror .
Rio Royale:" Can't see why we can't smash up the place up like a proper gang."
Sierra Lima:"I quite agree..that was agony to listen too"
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Frame 46:
Louisa stands up from her stool and gestures to the scene going on in the background..Chas potters towards the bar where Bruiser and a lethargic Crocker are waiting for him .
Louisa Sheen:" Like those two cavemen over there would -watch how this plays out and you'll thank me later
Frame 47:
Chas casually strolls towards Bruiser and Crocker (who's now passed out on the bar ) Bruiser seems uneasy on his feet too eyelids seem very heavy Chas friendly asks them.
Chas Flowers:" Good evening gentlemen what will it be?"
Bruiser Collins:" Your gaff Flowers .. The Skroats want you to cough up pronto!"
Frame 48:
Close Up of Chas, rolling his eyes...
Chas Flowers:"Business hasn't exactly been blooming this month .. tell your guvnor to ease off "
Bruiser Collins:"Or what? I've a good mind to.."
Frame 49:
Bruiser falls flat on his face ..much to Flowers astonishment ..Crocker is snoozing on the bar dead to the world.
SFX:"FRRRUUDDD!"
Frame 50:
Chas gazes down at the unconscious enforcer not quite sure what to make of it. The bar maid Doris looks concerned at her employer
Chas Flowers:"You been plying these jokers with drinks Doris?"
Doris Moat:" Nahh Chas ..these lightweights only had two beers?"
Frame 51:
Louisa and the other Deadly Sins approach the landlord ..
Louisa Sheen:" No Mr Flowers ...that would be our doing.. or rather JJ's doing.."
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Frame 52:
Louisa, Rio, Sierra and JJ Royale front view Profile view of Chas.JJ holding small bottle of sleeping tablets-
Louisa Sheen:" You could call JJ our sleeper agent she specialises in tranqualizing creeps like these"
JJ Royale:" They call me Sister Sloth.. slipped a couple of mickeys in their drinks.. they should be out for a couple of hours"
Chas Flowers :"hmm subtle I like your style of protection -saves the aggro -the amount of the times I've had to re-decorate this place"
Frame 53:
Rita Tusk approaches the rest of The Deadly Sins -she walks the walk that drives men crazy - very much the epitone of lust with beehive going skyward and her nose in the air ..
Rita Tusk :" I wouldn't speak too soon Charley -if Mrs Flowers were ever to discover the footage of our quickie :"
Chas Flowers:"You mean to tell me you filmed us..how?"
Frame 54:
A robotic arm extends from Rita's bouffant with a device that looks like a lense. Chas stands in shock and disgust.
Chas Flowers:"Should of known.. too good to be true"
Rita Tusk:" Look at this way - we can have as much fun every month if you pay up- better than having head flushed down the bog by Skroats goons wouldn't you agree"
Frame 55:
Louisa arms folded addresses Chas who is trying to lift up the dozing bruiser towards the pub exit.
Louisa Sheen:"Sex is another weapon at our disposal -Rita here specializes in mens core weaknesses"
. Chas Flowers:" hussies!.. pah give us a hand 'ere can't have these slobs putting off punters"
Frame 56:
Rio Royale: speaks to Doris the barmaid who stands behind the counter.
Rio Royale:" If you could make the cheque payable to Byron Powell .."
Doris Moat:" Byron Powell.. the former M.P? surely he's dead?"
Rio Royale:" and No questions and another pint of slobbit .. I'm a real glutton"
Louisa drags Crocker by his feet back view , whilst Rita and Chas try to shift the much more bulkier Bruiser .
Chas Flowers:" What 'appen's when Skroats heavies come looking for these bozo's?"
Louisa Sheen:" They won't..."
Frame 57:
Close up of Louisa Smiling
Louisa Sheen:" After what we pull off tonight -you won't hear from Harry and Syd ever again."
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Frame 58:
13 Chester Street -The Party is full swing drinks are consumed booties are been shook ,purple hearts swallowed, people are having a good time - all accept Jonah who is having trouble trying to get Emillia into the spirit of things .. who is more concerned about her dog who was dashed off through the legs of some go go dancers
Jonah Jacks: "C'mon gurl , shake a tail feather"
Emillia Woods:"Niet! Niet! "
Frame 59:
Emillia runs from Jonah in pursuit of her dog front view . Jonah is wrong footed and falls backwards
. Emillia Woods :"Yuri Yuri!!"
Frame 60:
A big suedehead with a porkpie hat grabs the blonde by the wrist ,he doesn't want Emillia to leave any place in a hurry.
Suedehead:"Going somewhere luv.. hows about.."
Frame 61:
Emilla hurls the big man over her shoulder as if it he was nothing the big mod lands flat on his back.
.Frame 62:
Emillia skuttles off in pursuit of the running dog-the suedehead flat on his ass ponders what has happened to him -it's not quite what he expected .We see his friends trouser leg as he offers to lift him up to his feet.
Suedehead:" What the..?"
Suedehead's Friend:" You alrite Tel? .."
Frame 63:
Front view of Tel and his two mates... Jonah opens his big mouth at the wrong time.
Jonah Jacks :" Don't touch what you can't afford mate"
Tel:" Where she get to?"
Tel's mate:"Never mind that-get her boyfriend"
Frame 65:
The trio of mods surround Jonah brandishing fists Jonah is backed into a corner -he's no push over but at leas ttwo of the other Kliquers are bigger than him .
Jonah Jacks:"C'mon lads .. she's not my bird, just met her ..onest!"
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Frame 66:
Crocker and Bruiser lying down on the tarmac the tranqulisers JJ slipped them had the desired effect in the distance two robotic cops -Metaltops catch sighr of the two dozing on the pavement.
Metaltop 1: "Allo Allo Allo ,sensors indicate two vagrants "
Metaltop 2:" I'll run a alcohol scan "
Frame 67 :
One of droids arches down and runs hand over the unconsious Bruiser whilst his partner watches on.
Metaltop 2:" Light traces of lager hardly enough to get intoxicated..."
Metaltop 1: "Seems like these carbon based units have a very low constitution .. "
Frame 68:
Aerial view of two robots standing over the two drugged mods.
Metaltop 2:" Sensors do indicate high traces of horse tranquliser ..they've been drugged."
Frame 69:
Cops fingers light sensors turn blue as it scans Crockers head .
Metaltop 2: "but get this.. records show this is Bert Tupin ..Special Branch"
Frame 70:
A view of the robots feet as they survey the sleeping men.
Metal-Top 1: "We'll take them to the Yard keep them separated, we don't want to blow Tupins cover -best get the big one chipped -he doesn't seem to have a implant."
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Frame 71:
The Drag Wulf the Deadly Sins ride high above London City the ground sparkles with lights in the night sky..at the wheel Rio, in the passenger seat Louisa.
Rio Royale:" Running into those Kliqueys could of blown our mission"
Louisa:"Don't sweat it Rio ..everythings going to schedule"
Frame 72:
In the back seat sit Rita, JJ and Sierra who is looking at her phone (has a union jack on it-like Carolinas)
Sierra Lima: "It's Mrs Pink ... how's the party?"
Frame 73:
Mrs Pink in her distinctive pink hat appears on Sierras phone screen she looks worried..
Mrs Pink:" I've seen Emillia .. but she's disappeared I'll try and.."
Frame 74:
Mrs Pink on the phone surveys room -see's Jonah getting the crap beaten out of him.
Jonah "Gerrrofff!"
Mrs Pink:"I'll get back to you at the party Sierra, there's some kind of fracas going on -I can barely make you out"
Frame 75:
Mrs Pink reveals a beautiful katana from under her long trenchcoat she moves like a ninja -the thugs beating up Jonah suddenly freeze in terror .
Mrs Pink:"Clear off you bullies!"
Frame 76:
The trio run off- they know not to mess with hard japanese steel Mrs Pink bends down to assist the beaten Jonah.
Mrs Pink:" You ok ?"
Jonah Jacks"yeah bloody tip top..fucking cowards.."
Frame 77:
Side view of Louisa in seat looking straight through window.
Louisa Sheen:" Sounds like Emillia's gone awol just typical..."
Frame 78:
The Drag Wulf points its nose downwards towards the city lights..
. Louisa Sheen:" Take her down Rio , can't be fashionably late if our russian sisters in trouble"
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Frame 78:
New Scotland Yard -a huge Policemans Hat shaped floating sky station -like a mini Death Star -lots of windows lights and funnels below the city all lit up and pretty.
Bruiser Collins:" Friggin' pigs -get your filthy mitts off me!"
D.I Blackfoot "Strap him down -I'd say this guy needs a Compeller 4000-"
Frame 79:
Bruiser struggles in vain as the heavilly armoured cops are more than a match for the big mod as they heave him over to a big sinister looking chair the unarmoured Detective Seargeant -
Bruiser Collins: "You aint fuckin' chipping me you maggots"
DS Blackfoot:" The 4000 is very popular-considering it has all the latest aps -you'll be right as rain after we're done"
Frame 80:
Bruiser has head in straps now a laser dot on head... he's fuming.
Bruiser Collins:"You aint turning me into no shopping junky you bastards!"
Frame 81:
The laser ignites and pierces Collins forehead in the chair as this happens Blackfoot walksaway to leave.
DS Blackfoot:"We could of thrown the book at you Collins, extortion , smoking , lord knows what else.. this is the best option for both of us."
Bruiser Collins:" Niiieeeerrrrghhh!"
Frame 82:
Back view of Blackfoot walking down corridor..
Bruiser Collins:" eeeeeeeeeeee!"
DS Blackfoot:" No shame in been a happy shopper .. I have to attend to your sleeping partner"
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Frame 83:
Bert Tupin aka Davey Crocker is sitting in a futuristic version of a police canteen, looking relaxed cup of hot tea - no longer wearing parka , in his putrid purple suit -he's lost hat -DS Blackfoot enters canteen and greets the undercover cop.
DS Blackfoot : "wotcha Bert -whats it like to back in civilization"
Bert Tupin:" Custhy Sarge, I'd almost forgotten how foul this tea is"
Frame 84:
Blackfoot sits down .. it's been a tiresome day.
DS Blackfoot:"It's hardly earl grey I grant you, Korporation cut backs saw to that.. so whatcha got?."
Frame 85:
Close up of Tupin , very Putin and Shifty
Bert Tupin :"A few weeks ago, got word from The Skroats to do a little job for him... lift a couple of scooters from a car showroom -thing is there was more to these flying hairdryers than meets the eye.."
Frame 86
: Bert continues story -view from Blackfoots point of view as he sips his tea.
DS Blackfoot:" Go on "
Bert Tupin :"Top of the range machines -straight off the processing plants of Trade City .. thing is inserted into machines computers jamming equipment.. not sure what for.. but not regular if you ask me"
DS Blackfoot:"Jammers?"
Frame 87:
Side view Blackfoot:
DS Blackfoot: "Could be Korps technology-military hardware -the worse case scenario is that it's Militia equipment-but they're not that advanced in that field"
Frame 88:
Side view of Tupin.
Bert Tupin:" The Skroats were as shocked as we were -still he figured these scoots might come in use -perhaps for breaking into banks and whatnot"
Frame 89:
" View of other off duty cops in canteen walking around with trays and chatting whilst Blackfoot and Tupin continue conversation.
DS Blackfoot:"So where are these machines now?"
Bert Tupin:" Well the flash gits the faces , fly around on them , they aint aware of what these scooters are carrying mind-you'll find them all at Steve Chariots-he's having a rave up."
Frame 90:
Blackfoot rises from seat...
DS Blackfoot: " Chariot? where do I find him.."
Bert Tupin:"13 Chester Street.. I think.."
DS Blackfoot:" Better send the heavy mob-those jammers could be lethal to the security of this city "
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Frame 91: Chester Street the Drag Wulf is now parked on he pavement the Sins are all out the car apart from Rio -there is a bashing noise coming from the car boot...
Louisa Sheen:" You know the drill.. we go in get Pinky and Woody out of there then hop on the scooters -the correct ones mind "
Rita Tusk :"Better let that cretin out I guess,"
Frame 92:
Pulp Fiction /Resevoir Dogs trunk shot of Rita opening car boot
Rita Tusk:" Out you come Masher"
Frame 93:
Rita and Sierra are greeted a very breathless and irate Masher Thompkins -the devil child mutant in old school , school uniform
Masher Thompkins:"Thanks a bunch! why can't I ride in back with you lot?"
Sierra Lima:"Because You're a fiend!"
Rita Tusk:"And a mucky pup to boot"
Frame 93:
Louisa unzips jacket , JJ standing next to her by car
. Louisa Sheen:"Better lose the jacket JJ - Kliqueys don't take to our sense of style"
Louisa hands jacket to Rio in car whilst JJ disrobes-
JJ Royale:"Wouldn't want to burn all those party-goers either -well some of them anyhow."
Frame 95: Masher talking to Louisa's boot and trouser leg (he's only little)
Masher Thompkins:" Bring us back some nibbles sweetheart !"
Louisa Sheen:" I'll see what I can do, look after Rio and The Wulf for us big guy"
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Frame 96:
View from hallway of 13 Chester Street-the Sins shadows can be made out in the window
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See it just ended - but decided to come back to this as it's mine and mine alone -I've had a shite week just want life to change instead I the same old same old -and I aspire to something better I gotta try at least. Hopefully feel better by Monday gonna be another year older dunno if its worth celebrating,
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